Hey Ioannis, I like what you’re sayin’ and doin’ here… okay no I can’t be invested enough in this to ‘like’ it, but it’s inoffensive. Inoffensive, but please hire an editor. I have wreaked my share of havoc upon the translators throughout New Eden and committed my fair share of Language Crimes, but that second paragraph in particular has a dire need of the kind of love and care professionals can provide.
Surely someone can help you out? It really does reflect upon the organization.