# YC 122 New Eden Capsuleer's Writing Contest

**URL:** <https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209>\
**Category:** Intergalactic Summit\
**Tags:** contest, roleplay\
**Created:** [March 1, 2020, 9:27pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209 "2020-03-01T21:27:19Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 20\
**Page:** 2

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**Author:** ![Komi\_Valentine](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/komi_valentine/32/502956_2.png) [@Komi\_Valentine](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Komi_Valentine)\
**Post date:** [April 26, 2020, 1:47am UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/22 "2020-04-26T01:47:25Z")

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Here you go:  
Please don’t spoiler youself with the pictures =^\_^=

> [@\[YC 122 NEWC \] Conscience](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-newc-conscience/235596):
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> A man opened his eyes. His breathe moved a few small grains of sand. Though he was dazed by a pulsating headache, he could feel the hot ground and a soft wind playing in his hair. After a while the man tried to sit up but his clumsy attempt only resulted in him loosing his balance and falling over. With a quiet groan he finally sat up in pain. Then he slowly, and not without effort, came to his feet and froze at what his eyes saw. The men stood on a big dune and looked at the horizon where a …

It was really hard and I’m sure there is a lot I can improve on. 🙂  
I hope you enjoy the pictures and remember: it’s just a story, not reality. In my reality there is only one language and no need for a universal translator 😉

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**Author:** ![Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/lunarisse_aspenstar/32/478487_2.png) [@Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Lunarisse_Aspenstar)\
**Post date:** [April 26, 2020, 11:49pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/23 "2020-04-26T23:49:32Z")

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Updated with all entries to date!

About 3 weeks from May 15th deadline.

Plenty of time to write something to submit (or to submit something you’ve worked on since the last contest!)

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**Author:** ![Lasairiona\_Raske](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/lasairiona_raske/32/467893_2.png) [@Lasairiona\_Raske](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Lasairiona_Raske)\
**Post date:** [April 27, 2020, 4:52pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/24 "2020-04-27T16:52:13Z")

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Submitted for my daughter, Madeleine Raske-Lancier, age 9, under poetry.

As verified by her tutor, no assistance was given.

[YC 122 Poetry Entry Universe Dreams](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-writing-contest-universe-dreams/235944)

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**Author:** ![4e6f74206964656e\_746966696564](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/4e6f74206964656e_746966696564/32/200953_2.png) [@4e6f74206964656e\_746966696564](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/4e6f74206964656e_746966696564)\
**Post date:** [April 28, 2020, 1:55am UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/25 "2020-04-28T01:55:49Z")

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For non competitive

> [@Restless Sleepers](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/restless-sleepers/116983):
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> It all began at Seyllin Countless people across multiple systems died in the blue light of an A0-type star gone nova It was soon discovered that it was caused by Isogen-5, but that was soon forgotten in what was to come. Wormholes appeared across New Eden, and the four empires made some of the first forays in, followed by the Capsuleers But where three Empires went in to explore, one knew where to look The Amarr knew where they were going, and in doing so, found a Sleeper Enclave They harv…

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**Author:** ![Vladimir\_Korff](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/vladimir_korff/32/505947_2.png) [@Vladimir\_Korff](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Vladimir_Korff)\
**Post date:** [May 2, 2020, 11:29am UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/26 "2020-05-02T11:29:27Z")

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Please accept my submission in Prose category - [The Lesser of Evils](https://encapsulated.space/index.php/the-lesser-of-evils/).

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**Author:** ![Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/lunarisse_aspenstar/32/478487_2.png) [@Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Lunarisse_Aspenstar)\
**Post date:** [May 2, 2020, 1:09pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/27 "2020-05-02T13:09:42Z")

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Added four more entries to the OP

Still two weeks to go!

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**Author:** ![Kyle\_Saltz](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/kyle_saltz/32/438636_2.png) [@Kyle\_Saltz](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Kyle_Saltz)\
**Post date:** [May 3, 2020, 9:11am UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/28 "2020-05-03T09:11:53Z")

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I would like to submit this paper on Poetry please.

> [@YC 122 New Eden Writing Competition) Poetry (I must control my rage)](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-writing-competition-poetry-i-must-control-my-rage/237354):
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> Priests say I must not hate, but I wont pretend. What Recking Crew has done to my Providence Friends. The Scars you left on our hearts and souls will take time to fade. Oh, if I had your cruel hart, my vengeance will not bade. I must control my mind and soul and not give into the rage. I must control the fight from here, and not yeet into a cage. Yet you will do, no doubt, for your heart is so cruel. You revel in the pain you cause, for you are no fool. In the name of God and Empire, you…

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**Author:** ![Charles\_Cambridge\_Schmidt](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/charles_cambridge_schmidt/32/372217_2.png) [@Charles\_Cambridge\_Schmidt](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Charles_Cambridge_Schmidt)\
**Post date:** [May 3, 2020, 2:46pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/29 "2020-05-03T14:46:27Z")

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I’ll get to it soon.

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**Author:** ![Jurius\_Doctor](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/jurius_doctor/32/243354_2.png) [@Jurius\_Doctor](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Jurius_Doctor)\
**Post date:** [May 3, 2020, 7:02pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/30 "2020-05-03T19:02:46Z")

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If it is acceptable for me to do so, I would like to submit two separate pieces for independent consideration - both are prose:

1. A short story: [_Shards of Seyllin_](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-cwc-shards-of-seyllin/237614)
2. A scathing [in-character rebuttal of Komi Valentine’s CSM campaign](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/csm-15-vote-for-komi/237106/16)

Either will do, really, but I think I prefer the first.

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**Author:** ![Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/lunarisse_aspenstar/32/478487_2.png) [@Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Lunarisse_Aspenstar)\
**Post date:** [May 4, 2020, 3:48am UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/31 "2020-05-04T03:48:25Z")

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Both entries have been accepted and will be listed on my next update

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**Author:** ![Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/lunarisse_aspenstar/32/478487_2.png) [@Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Lunarisse_Aspenstar)\
**Post date:** [May 4, 2020, 1:40pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/32 "2020-05-04T13:40:29Z")

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On review, item 2 is classed under news as an opinion piece, editorial.

Also update made, 6 new entries added to the competition list in the OP 🙂

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**Author:** ![Gaven\_Lok\_ri](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/gaven_lok_ri/32/293159_2.png) [@Gaven\_Lok\_ri](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Gaven_Lok_ri)\
**Post date:** [May 5, 2020, 3:19pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/33 "2020-05-05T15:19:58Z")

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I will submit to category 3 the theological essay “[God Does Not Forgive: A Rejection of the Recent Concept of Forgivable Generational Inherited Sin](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/excubitoris-chapter-god-does-not-forgive-a-rejection-of-the-recent-concept-of-forgivable-generational-inherited-sin/202550)” that was originally published on the IGS on November 19, 121.

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**Author:** ![Constantin\_Baracca](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/constantin_baracca/32/170074_2.png) [@Constantin\_Baracca](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Constantin_Baracca)\
**Post date:** [May 8, 2020, 10:15pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/34 "2020-05-08T22:15:26Z")

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I would ask to hereby submit [[YC 122 Poetry] I Danced With Her, Cloaked In Night](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-poetry-i-danced-with-her-cloaked-in-night/239633) for consideration, with my thanks.

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**Author:** ![Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/lunarisse_aspenstar/32/478487_2.png) [@Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Lunarisse_Aspenstar)\
**Post date:** [May 9, 2020, 12:08am UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/35 "2020-05-09T00:08:22Z")

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OP updated with four new entries.

Deadline is May 15th! Only one week left! Still time to write, polish and submit 🙂

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**Author:** ![Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/lunarisse_aspenstar/32/478487_2.png) [@Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Lunarisse_Aspenstar)\
**Post date:** [May 12, 2020, 2:09pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/36 "2020-05-12T14:09:32Z")

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its May 12th - Deadline is May 15th ((OOC - I accept May 15th, as anywhere in the world))

Still time for some more entries!

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**Author:** ![Renn\_Omaya](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/renn_omaya/32/200847_2.png) [@Renn\_Omaya](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Renn_Omaya)\
**Post date:** [May 12, 2020, 2:16pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/37 "2020-05-12T14:16:38Z")

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Regarding submission, I have the story posted on my blog. Do I need to copy/paste the story text into this thread or just link to the blog post?

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**Author:** ![Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/lunarisse_aspenstar/32/478487_2.png) [@Lunarisse\_Aspenstar](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Lunarisse_Aspenstar)\
**Post date:** [May 12, 2020, 5:30pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/38 "2020-05-12T17:30:49Z")

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Either is fine, whichever works best for you. You may prefer to link the blog to retain as much of the original presentation.

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**Author:** ![Renn\_Omaya](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/renn_omaya/32/200847_2.png) [@Renn\_Omaya](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Renn_Omaya)\
**Post date:** [May 12, 2020, 11:07pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/39 "2020-05-12T23:07:25Z")

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I would like to submit the following story to the Prose category: [https://chasingtheblack.wordpress.com/2020/05/11/red-vs-blue/](https://chasingtheblack.wordpress.com/2020/05/11/red-vs-blue/)

Ownership verification: [https://chasingtheblack.wordpress.com/2020/05/12/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/](https://chasingtheblack.wordpress.com/2020/05/12/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/)

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**Author:** ![Arsia\_Elkin](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/arsia_elkin/32/388703_2.png) [@Arsia\_Elkin](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Arsia_Elkin)\
**Post date:** [May 12, 2020, 11:25pm UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/40 "2020-05-12T23:25:26Z")

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I would like to submit the following to the prose category:  
[The Little Girl Who Spoke to The Trees](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-newc-prose-the-little-girl-who-spoke-to-the-trees/240713)

Different than what I was originally writing, but I like it.

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**Author:** ![Eli\_Jibb](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/eveonline/user_avatar/forums.eveonline.com/eli_jibb/32/184183_2.png) [@Eli\_Jibb](https://forums.eveonline.com/u/Eli_Jibb)\
**Post date:** [May 13, 2020, 7:24am UTC](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-new-eden-capsuleers-writing-contest/223209/41 "2020-05-13T07:24:26Z")

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I would like to submit the following to the poem category:

> [@\[YC 122 NEWCWC\] Options](https://forums.eveonline.com/t/yc-122-newcwc-options/240778):
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> Trigs or Empire, which one to chose? Which is the better, the better to use. One has numbers with plenty of ships to be had. The other fights hard and scares the childrens to bed. Which is the best the best to chose? Why not play both! As this capsuler’s immortal and can truly never lose!

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