EVE novice registration proposal - story

I met EVE in Nanjing, China in 2006, and it has been 13 years now. Along the way, I am gratified to see how EVE continues to grow.

n the past I was just a player, I passively enjoyed the fun of EVE. I have identified EVE as not an ordinary game, he provides a virtual world. Playing in the game is only the second most complicated social system to maintain EVE. Yes, I have friends in EVE, I am very happy.

But it is different now! It is no longer the era before 2008. For the current game market, players have more and more choices. There are fewer and fewer friends. EVE is moving towards an aging population.

EVE needs a "change." I will recommend my proposal for a while. Gradually released.

For 13 years, I worked on game distribution and game production. Now I am also involved in the esports game business. And small achievements. I will write out why I recommend this in each proposal. And what changes will happen with this.

EVE’s novice guides from past simple tips, opportunities, space agents, professional agents, to the current interstellar agency-seeker investigation mission.

Really. I can see the efforts of the production team, but it is not good enough. My own attempt to experience. Recommended for ordinary people and sci-fi enthusiasts. Submit to a professional evaluation agency experience. The evaluation given is not good.

Impressed comments, I want to refute, but they gave up halfway (There is a good framework, world view, but many places are too rough.)

After some investigation and trial, I feel that it is time to submit the plan.

An excellent game guide is very important and it must be met.

Give new customers an excellent "substitute sense"

Help new customers become familiar with the operation

Guide new customers to experience game content

Pave the way for future game content

Suggestions for process modification of the game creation role

When the player enters the game for the first time to create a character, the whole game needs the sense of substitution. This will directly affect how long the new user can persist in the subsequent process.

Current Process: Opening Animation - Character Selection Interface - Creating Roles - Selecting Power - Selecting a Family - DIY Characters - Selecting a Social Background - Choosing a School Background - Entering the Game

n the past, more is to show power and family history. It now simplifies the display of information and provides a ship preview. This choice is not good, he seems to meet the demand, but in fact it is not enough

Below I will present my proposal (because there is no art creation ability, I will try my best to describe it clearly.)

The script will be created later.Otherwise, the length is too long, I will write independently.#

script:

  1. New players enter the game for the first time

/ / Play settings animation CG (animated content is no longer a notice CG, fixed settings CG # set CG theme is: Who am I? I am a clone pilot!

The focus of CG is: For new players, how important are you to EVE, how different! Now you are awakened to a new world. Your story is about to begin. )

2, enter the initial role creation (I named her the clone pilot to register the Immigration Department)

#Scenes. First-person perspective. A reception hall with a sci-fi theme. . A beautiful receptionist. Other support scenarios

set up. This is the immigration reception center of the Department of Uniform Cooperation (or other). New players here to go through the immigration process (choose the role creation settings) will meet the beautiful AI Aola here.

/script

Aola: Hello traveler, "EVE" welcomes you. Is there anything I can do for you?

Me: Yes, I am from a distant place, I want to visit here.

Aola: Sorry! I can’t confirm your identity further in my database. I can’t go through immigration procedures according to the **** regulations.

#Silence for a while, a person who can’t see the face, came over. Wearing a gorgeous dress.#

Mysterious man: Ok! Ola. Don’t bully outsiders. Execute the **** plan.

Aola: The plan begins to be implemented, yes. Chief.

#When the mysterious man passed by, he whispered to me: The earth is a beautiful place. He left without waiting for my answer.#

Aola:Hello, you are authorized to participate in the clone program, please read the guide. Then fill out the registration form.

Scenes. Some information appears on the screen

set up. The e-books of the future will provide a brief introduction of various forces in the form of propaganda materials, ships, and an official document **** plan *** clone plan (the above readings will eventually be in the form of articles, connections) Save for the player to read later, which will involve a system. Please let me add in the follow-up content). Players can have a general understanding of the basic forces, ships, characters, etc. after reading the above information. Then select the registration function. (The player can also choose to register without reading the reading. The registration function can be logged out at any time to watch the reading. The return will not be cleared to enter the content, unless the player changes it himself) (Please include, clone, transform, facelift in the clone plan) , join a nationality, can not be repented, etc. This is an important setting and foreshadowing)

Register settings. Registration settings must be designed to be strict. Just like a real registration form. Can simplify unnecessary content, some of the information here will affect some of the content in the subsequent role panel, such as personal information.

**** clone plan registration form

Role name, gender, age, personal description. Other places only make an art style. No need for players to fill out.

After registration is completed – submit

Aola:Collect and confirm that it is correct. Wait a minute. . . . The sound of the current. . .

Aola:To confirm. You have obtained **** level permissions. Please go to the technical maintenance department for the next step. I will explain other things in detail later.

Come to the technical maintenance department. This is a surgical scene, a place dedicated to human transformation.

Character DIY and national power choices will be made here.

//Doctor: Dylan Walsh: Wonderful meeting! Sit down and choose the one you like.

Enter the character preview and choose your favorite country, pedigree and character. Although the gender is filled in the registration form. But here players can still choose other genders.

Player DIY character completed

// I chose the same gender role as when I was enrolled. Doctor: Dylan Walsh: Is that true? It doesn’t look much different from what you are now!

// I chose a different gender from the registration form. Doctor: Dylan Walsh: Hey! The extra part is mine.

#After confirmation, the player is stunned after being injected with mysterious liquid.

wake up

I wake up from a hatchery. There are many people around me who are exactly the same as me. One of them was taken away. Then fall into the dark

wake up

A simple ward. Aola came in

// Aola: follow me

#The player is taken to the escape cabin

Aola: After the data is entered, this is a gift from ****. **The country’s insurance procedures are also complete. after…

A gunshot started the chaos, unfortunately Ola was hit.

// Aola: Please wait for the ** to leave and leave here. (Current sound)

Their goal is me. They attack the people around them. But they met the guards’ block

Aola ran to the console to start the device, but at the last minute. Aola took out the electronic chip and placed it in the hands of the player.

The screen ends. A large outbound button is shown in the middle

At this point, the stage where the new player creates the character is completed, and the next stage enters the game novice guide.##

##Problems involved in the scenario script##

  1. It is recommended to use comics and graphic interfaces, including CG. You can control the cost and increase the sense of substitution.

2, the text of the clone plan

  1. The contents of a bunch of promotional magazines

  2. In what form should the preservation of these guidance documents and materials? Easy to access.

5, the way the dialogue is displayed

6, art settings

7, create a second role (recommended to create a character after the second time is the same as the above script. Just remove the mysterious person, remove the attack. Peace complete the handover. Then enter the universe)

##Why am I designing this way?##

EVE is a huge world with many settings, history, and characters. and many more. It’s a good stage, but it’s too much data. A game is the most important sense of substitution for newcomers. To get through the initial self-awareness, self-setting and recognition of the worldview. But EVE now skips this phase directly. This is the key to EVE’s newcomers to newcomers. There is no sense of substitution. There is no gradual cognitive world. It’s like throwing a child suddenly into Times Square in New York and letting him find a person to open an account in the stock market with limited road signs.

##Purpose and elaboration##

The above setting scheme is only my personal setting. I just want to express the need to improve the substitution of the game and the survival rate of the newcomer. I need a set of scientific and reasonable solutions. The goals in this program are as follows. As long as the same purpose can be achieved. Scripts can be played infinitely. I also expect to write scripts with many people.

  1. Cognitive players, you are an outsider, you are about to enter the world of EVE

2, buried in the foreshadowing, telling the player that you may not be alone in EVE. Who is this mysterious person? This question may allow players to accept longer game exploration practices

  1. You are very special. You are different from the local residents of EVE. You are special!

4, through the display of information to understand the basic settings of the game, the world view, and equipment weapons that you can use later

5, DIY role, and through the description of the cosmetic scene, further enhance player awareness. this is you. You are me.

6, mysterious. A sense of violation. It seems that this is not as simple as the surface.

  1. Danger. You are not safe in this world, you have enemies. They are ruthless and cruel.

  2. Although you are not ready yet, your story in the EVE world is about to begin.

With such an emotional atmosphere, players will be able to get in touch with EVE’s world.

Destiny turns at this moment, your story is about to begin, there are still many unknowns in the future, and brave exploration. Don’t be afraid when you are on the road! You have friends! You are not boring on the road ahead! You have an enemy! Go to the universe! Go to the future!

##The next program notice: eve novice plot guide – sailing##

I hope that my friends and I will complete this huge design. Art settings are especially needed.

My Twitter @ryel_1990

##My difficulties##

I don’t paint and use PS, I can’t make a scene. I hope that some friends can work together.

My English writing ability is limited, I will attach my national language text.

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2006年我在中国南京遇见了EVE,到现在已经13年了。一路坎坷走道现在,看着EVE不断的成长我感到欣慰。
在过去我只是一个玩家,我被动的享受着EVE的乐趣。我鉴定的认为EVE不是一款普通的游戏,他提供一个虚拟的世界。在游戏中玩法只是其次复杂的社交体系才是维系EVE的根本。是的在EVE中我有朋友,我无比的开心。
但现在不一样了!再也不是2008年前的时代了。对于现在游戏市场来说玩家的选择越来越多了。朋友越来越少了。EVE正在走向人口的老龄化。
EVE需要一场“变革“。以后的一段时间内我会将我的建议方案。逐步的发布出来。
13年,我从事了游戏发行,游戏制作。现在也创业投身到了电竞游戏事业。并小有成就。我会在每个建议方案中写出我为什么这么建议。和这么做会带来怎样的变化。

EVE的新手引导从过去的简单提示,机遇,空间代理,职业代理,到现在的星际代理处-探寻者调查任务。
说真的。能看到用心但真的不够好。我自己的尝试体验。推荐给普通人和科幻爱好者体验。提交给专业的评测机构体验。给予的评价都不好。
(有很好的框架,世界观,但很多地方太过粗糙。)
在经过一定的调查和尝试后我觉得是时候将方案提交出来了。
一款优秀的游戏引导是非常重要的,它必须符合。
给予新客户优秀的代入感
帮助新客户熟悉操作
引导新客户体验游戏内容
为以后的游戏内容做好铺垫

一、目前游戏创建角色的流程修改建议:
当玩家第一次进入游戏创建角色时是整个游戏最需要代入感的时候,这将直接影响新用户在后续的流程中可以坚持多长时间。
目前流程:开头动画-角色选择界面-创建角色-选择势力-选择家族-DIY角色-选择社会背景-选择学校背景-进入游戏
再过去的流程中更多的是展示势力和家族历史。现在则简化信息展示,提供了舰船预览,这种选择一定放弃了很多坚持,听取了很多建议。但这是在错误的基础上做出的优化。
下面我将提出我的方案建议(因为毫无美术创作能力,我将尽我可能描述清楚。)

脚本:
1、新玩家初次进入游戏
//播放设定动画CG(动画内容不再是版本CG而是固定的设定CG#设定CG的主题是:我是谁?我是克隆驾驶员!#这个脚本以后在说#核心的目的是形象的告诉新玩家,你对EVE来说你是多么重要,多么的与众不同!现在你被唤醒一个新的世界将展现在你的面前。)
2、进入初次角色创建(我给她取名叫克隆飞行员登记入境处)
#场景 第一人称视角。一个星际主题的接待大厅。充满科幻。一个接待处。一个美丽的接待人员。场景其他配套
#设定 这里是统合部(或者其他)的入境接待处。新玩家在这里办理入境等级手续(选择角色创建设定)在这里将遇见美丽的AI奥拉。
//脚本
奥拉:你好外来者,‘服务器名称’欢迎您的到来。有什么我可以帮助你的么?
外来者:是的,我来自一个遥远的地方,我想到这里看看。
奥拉:抱歉!在我的数据库中无法进一步确认你的身份,根据条例无法办理入境手续。
沉默片刻,远处走过来一个看不清面目的人。但外表看上去很高贵。
神秘人:好了!奥拉。别欺负外来人。执行
预案。
奥拉:指令接受,是的长官。
神秘人路过的时候低声对我说:地球是个令人怀恋的地方。不等我回答便走开了。
奥拉的声音再次响起:你好,你已被授权参与克隆人计划,请阅读指南。然后填写登记表格。
#场景 画面上出现一些资料
#设定 未来十足的电子书,以宣传物的形式 分别提供 各个势力的简单介绍,舰船,还有一份正式文件 ***计划方案 克隆人计划 (以上读物最后会以物品,连接的形式保存以供玩家后续阅读,这又将牵扯到一个系统。请让我在后续的内容中补充)。玩家在阅读以上资料后可以对基本的势力,舰船,人物外观等有大概的了解。然后选择登记功能。(玩家也可以不阅读读物直接选择登记,登记功能可以随时后退出来在观看读物。中途返回不会清除以输入内容,除非玩家自己更改)(在克隆人计划中请务必包含,克隆,改造,整容,加入一个国籍,无法反悔等描述。这是重要的设定和伏笔)
#登记设定 登记设定务必设计的死板一些。就像真的登记表格一样。但要简化不必要的内容,这里的部分信息将会影响到后续的角色面板中的部分内容,如个人信息。
克隆人计划 登记表
角色姓名,性别,年龄,个人描述。 其他地方内容只做一个美术样式。不需要玩家填写。
#登记完毕后-提交
//奥拉:以收取,确认无误。稍等。。。。电流音。。。
奥拉:以确认。您已获得
级权限。请去技术整备部门进行下一步。稍后我会详细介绍其他内容。
#场景 来到整备部门 这里是一个外科手术风格的场景,一个专门做人体改造的地方。
#设定 在这里将进行人物DIY和势力选择。
//医生:迪伦·沃尔什:奇妙的会见!坐下选择一个你喜欢的样子吧
#设定 进入角色预览,选择喜欢的国家,血统和人物形象。登记表中虽然填写了性别。但在这里玩家依然可以选择其他性别。
#设定 玩家DIY角色完成
//选择了和登记时同样的性别角色,医生:迪伦·沃尔什:就这样么?看起来和你现在的样子没多大变化嘛!
//选择了和登记时相反的性别,医生:迪伦·沃尔什:哼!既然这样那多余的部分我就留下收藏了。
#确认后,玩家被注射神秘液体后昏迷 播放一个15秒的CG
#醒来
#场景 从一个培养槽中苏醒,身边有无数和自己一模一样的人。并且看到其中一个人被释放出来带走,然后陷入黑暗。
#醒来
#场景 一个简洁的病房。奥拉走了进来。
//奥拉 跟我来
#玩家被带到逃生舱处。播放逃生舱CG。
//奥拉 资料输入完毕,这是
赠送给您的礼物。国家的保险手续也齐全。以后…
#场景 一声枪响 混乱开始, 不幸的是奥拉被击中。
//奥拉 “玩家名字”请等登上
号,离开这里。(断断续续伴随电流声)
#远处过来一群人 肆意的攻击周边的人群。并开始接近玩家,很明显他们的目标是玩家。但他们遇到了当地的守卫阻拦。
#奥拉,跑向控制台,启动了设备,但在最后一刻。奥拉取出了字的芯片放到玩家手里。
#画面结束。一个大大的出站按钮显示在中间。

##至此新玩家创建角色的阶段完毕,下阶段进入游戏新手引导##

##方案脚本中涉及到的问题##
1、推荐采用漫画和平面界面的形式展现,包括CG。可以控制成本也可以很好的增加代入感。
2、克隆人计划的文本
3、一堆宣传杂志的内容
4、该以什么样的形式来保存这些指导性文件和资料。方便查阅的。
5、对话的展示方式
6、美术设定
7、二次创建角色(建议在第二次以后创建角色时跟上面的脚本一样。只是去除神秘人,去除攻击事件。和平的完成交接。然后进入宇宙)

##我为什么这么设计##
EVE是一个庞大的世界,其中拥有很多设定,历史,人物。等等。是一个很好的舞台,但过分的数据化了。一个游戏对于新人来说最重要的代入感。来度过最开始的自我认知,自我设定和对世界观的认可。但EVE现在直接跳过了这个阶段。这才是EVE现在新人难以入门的关键。没有代入感。没有循序渐进的认知世界。就像把一个小孩子突然扔到了纽约时代广场,并让他在有限的路标下去股票市场找人开一个账户一样。
##目的和阐述##
上面的设定方案只是我个人的设定,只是想表达要提升游戏的代入感和新人的生存几率,需要一整套科学合理的方案。这份方案里的目标如下。只要可以达到一样的目的。脚本是可以发挥无限的像想的。我也期望跟多人写出脚本。
1、认知玩家,你是外来者,你即将进入EVE的世界
2、埋下伏笔,告诉玩家你在EVE中可能不孤独。这个神秘人是谁?这个疑问可能让玩家接受更长的游戏探索实践
3、你很特殊,你和EVE的本土居民不一样。你是特殊的!
4、通过展示资料了解游戏的基础设定,世界观,和你以后可以使用的装备武器展示
5、DIY角色,并通过整容的描述场景,进一步加强玩家认知。这就是你。你就是我。
6、神秘感。违和感。好像这一切不像表面那么简单
7、危险。你在这个世界不是安全的,你有敌人。他们无情残暴。
8、虽然你还没准备好,但你在EVE世界的故事即将开始。

带着这样的感情氛围,玩家才会跟好的去接触EVE的世界。
命运在这一刻转动,你的故事即将开始,未来还有许多未知,勇敢的探索吧。你前进道路上不要害怕!你有朋友!你前进的道路上并不枯燥!你有敌人!迈向宇宙吧!迈向未来吧!击倒你的敌人吧!

下期方案预告:eve新手剧情指引—航行

PS:希望有朋友和我一起完成这庞大的设计方案。特别需要美术设定。
我的推特 @ryel_1990

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