[Pod and Planet Submission] Angelic State


(Lasairiona Raske) #1

This is my second entry into the YC119 Pod and Planet Fiction Contest. It is submitted under the category Eight Thousand Suns in New Eden.

I’ve used a Google Drive file to retain the formatting.

Angelic State


(Greasyforehead) #2

I liked this story a lot. I felt inadequate with mine afterwards. Your bit with the cigarette and ash details reminds me of a piece done in a Clinton e-mail. I was shocked at the similarity! It gave me an actual emotional response that was fearful. Thank you.


(Lasairiona Raske) #3

Thanks :slight_smile:


(Hei Presto) #4

Really enjoyed it. Great work :+1:


(Lasairiona Raske) #5

Thank you :slight_smile:


(Telegram Sam) #6

Beautiful, LR. o7


(system) #7

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