I’m going to give some background info that may help to fully appreciate this poem.
The title refers to The Fall of Origin, and there are some references to the contents in that thread that I’ll let you find for yourselves, but it’s mostly in the OP and the critique on the readiness of Origin to defend against an invasion.
Refers to the fragments of the destroyed Indigo City supercluster of Indigo City and the surrounding citadels that enter the atmosphere of Renaissance every day.
Referring to the metaphorical hole in the cloth of/“wormhole” system Origin
Some of the mountains on Renaissance are high indeed, extending out above the atmosphere.
Isis is Origin’s sun.