Off-Topic Thread vol. 2

So, just as a minor style point: When the entire document lists an ‘About the Author’ that credits one name ‘Dameon Jaeger’, it’s not really necessary to attribute all of the quotations, separately, to Dameon Jaeger. After all, the whole thing is one long Dameon Jaeger quote; he wrote it.

Also, I think pages 18 and 19 are reversed, since the ‘Overview Setup’ heading title is, well, all of page 17, but page 18 is ‘About the Author’ and then page 19 is the actual information about setting up the overview. Oh, and p12, last word of the first paragraph has a typo. So does the first word of the 2nd sentence on p10.

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